Emptiness moved in on the path of death
Remember that night, you said you were upset
But the truth is you were busy with someone else
That night I was lonely, weeping alone in the dark...
The title may seem far from the words I used, but I think this is the best way to describe it, just like the movie Upside Down. It is uncertain if I have finished the poem, but, here it goes. Hope you would like it. I would appreciate comments.
3 COMMENTS
rekhanshiraghava
March 31, 2016 - 18:55 Great writing indeed.... Liked it....Manahill Naik
April 3, 2016 - 20:03 Thats a weird collection of thoughts indeed... u had my mind racingdavidehrgott
April 9, 2016 - 18:21 May the bright light never stray away.