The love teller

by M smiles
Jessica, Deborah and Chloe hangs out at a shopping mall. those three teenagers goes there every week after school. They went shopping, cinema, arcade, but most importantly, the love writer. Its a mechanical machine that tells how and what they should do for their crush. and they believed it.

"don't worry,your love is on its way.." jessica read her note that came out from the machine.

"tsk..aww its okay jess, i'm sure you'll be lucky someday." says chloe patting her friend's shoulder.

"its the same sentence since last week, guys.. how long should i wait for him? hes too dreamy." said jessica. her face was slightly disappointed.

"oh come on, its totally gonna happen. you just have to believe and feel confident. like me! i usually get the lucky signs" said deborah proudly. then its her turn to check the love writer. she swaps in 20sent into the machine. after a few seconds, a note comes out. she took it. they looked closely at the piece of paper at the same time.

'its time! its time for you to confess how you felt for him!' those sentence almost blew Deborah's mind. she felt anxious. should she confess? its been almost 2 years she hid her feelings for him. her friends was thrilled and happy for her.

"wow girl, you really got lucky this time! are you really gonna do it??" says chloe.

After that day, deborah meets Adam at the school field. she finally confessed.

"you liked me? wow.. i never knew that but sorry friend, i don't like you. i liked Ellie. shes hotter than you and plus, her parents are stinkin' rich!" the truths finally comes out of Adam's mouth.

(AFTER SCHOOL..)

"YOU FUCKIN LIAR YOU UGLY MECHANICAL STEEL! I WAS EMBARASSED IN FRONT OF ADAM, AND HIS FRIENDS!!" Deborah kicks the love machine. her head was full of anger then minding other peoples watching her.

"You call that LOVE?? Well i called it HUMILIATION! TAKE THIS! URGHHH!" she looks like the incredible hulk now. the diffrence is that shes not green and huge. But they are similar..

"whoa! whoa! heyyy..! stop, thats vandalisme. chill out friend!" a guy came for behind her and pulls her away from the destroyed machine. Her breath was up and down like a marathon.

Deborah turns to the guy. he seemed 20 and has a long brown-blondish hair with a 'balbo' beard style. he looks good. But Deborah's anger makes it none attractive. she stared at him with silence but only heard her deep breaths

"hey, why not we have a drink and talk this out. maybe that'll ease your 'bad relationship' with the machine. its on me" the guy kindly request to help. maybe this girl needs company.

They went to 'mc donalds' for french fries and coke.

"sooo...you actually believed the machine tells your 'love' fate??" the blond guy laughed. Deborah threw a french fry to his face.

"shut up! my hope for Adam was deep, okay? i had no idea what else to do..and turns out hes a typical dork" said deborah. feeling embarased for trusting a crappy machine.

"pfft.. hes not the only one who's typical here" the blond teases. But that did not made deborah laugh. instead, a spoon of ketchup was thrown on his face.

"its not funny, Jackson..." Deborah turn her face down. she felt grief. she feels like an idiot for herself.Deborah gets up and wants to go home immediately but jackso pulled her hand.

"hey im just jokin'. i'm sorry.. ya know, i take ya here cause maybe i thought you wanted some company. and all i wanna say after all this, you shouldn't put your hopes too high on something. you know why? because it depends how high your hopes and how hurt your going to be at the end when you didn't get what you want" Jackson said politely. he moves his head down to look at deborah's face.

deborah sucks a deep breath before looking up him. she smiled. how nice of him..

jackson put his mouth close to her ear and whisper,

"hey,..bros before hoes" he then winks.

deborah chuckled happily. agreeing to her partner.
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January 31, 2015 - 16:41 No title :(
M smiles

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January 31, 2015 - 16:54 oh gosh im sorry.thank you for reminding me
Vishnumayaa

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April 2, 2015 - 06:09 wow its nice . as i said you your stories are inspiring. keep writing

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